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Dear Christiane,
Thanks for having uploaded your abstract in time. The topic is interesting. Well done. The flow is good. 
Sharpen the focus. At the end, you will get most points for an "applicable" article, where you discuss a particular approach to the point where a reader can use it (ideally with templates and examples). A general "overview discussion" should briefly happen in the introduction, so the reader understands the context, but this should not be the entire article.
Try to focus on a specific area or an example to be more concrete.
Furthermore a suggestion that I give to all students is to be critical. At the end of the article give ur own idea about it. Explain pro and cons and find literature about it to prove your thesis.
Jess