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Dear Mie Louise Elsborg,
Thanks a lot for the wiki abstract. WELL DONE. The structure is perfect. You insert everything you need. You describe the theory and then you proceed with an example. And at the end you explain the limitations. Remember to be critical from your point of view in that part. It is important to make the article PERSONAL not just a paraphrasing some literature.
Regarding the abstract it is a  bit not clear at the beginning when you start your topic. You should think that your reader does not know the topic.
As first phrase I would define what VDC stands for and WHY that is important for PPPM in construction.
For the rest everything's good.
Jess