Talk:Brainstorming as a risk identification method - Revision history

Arslance at 22:55, 19 February 2018

2018-02-19T22:55:27Z

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			The summary is very good and clearly understandable. Maybe providing another citation would strengthen the argumentation.


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			As the article is not finished yet this question can't be answered.


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			The article is written professionally and contains now grammatical or spelling errors. The language used is easy to understand.

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			Since now the article doesn't provide any figures or tables.

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	What would you suggest to improve?		What would you suggest to improve?
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			As the article provides only the abstract since now the question can't be answered.
			The abstract is providing good information and arouses interest to further read it.

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			As the article provides only the abstract since now the question can't be answered.
			It will be interesting to read how detailed the author can connect the common brainstorming approach to risk identification.

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			The only source used since now was provided as reading material and is therefore a reliable source to use.

Arslance at 22:19, 19 February 2018

2018-02-19T22:19:04Z

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	Good reference, which is also given from the lecturers as recommended bibliography. Within the rest of the article it is necessary to implement two or three additional serious references to ensure the credibility and plausibility of the article.		Good reference, which is also given from the lecturers as recommended bibliography. Within the rest of the article it is necessary to implement two or three additional serious references to ensure the credibility and plausibility of the article.

	~~==Abstract Feedback==~~
	~~Text Clarity; Ok.~~

	~~Language; Ok.~~

	~~References; missing references related to the standards.~~

	~~In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to elaborate the article based in the sections recomended~~
	~~in the point 5, Individual Assignment of the Course handbook and check the Reference Reading material for the Wiki Assignment and Project Work.~~

	==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer Name: Cetin Arslan ==		==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer Name: Cetin Arslan ==

Arslance at 22:16, 19 February 2018

2018-02-19T22:16:09Z

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	Good reference, which is also given from the lecturers as recommended bibliography. Within the rest of the article it is necessary to implement two or three additional serious references to ensure the credibility and plausibility of the article.		Good reference, which is also given from the lecturers as recommended bibliography. Within the rest of the article it is necessary to implement two or three additional serious references to ensure the credibility and plausibility of the article.

			==Abstract Feedback==
			Text Clarity; Ok.

			Language; Ok.

			References; missing references related to the standards.

			In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to elaborate the article based in the sections recomended
			in the point 5, Individual Assignment of the Course handbook and check the Reference Reading material for the Wiki Assignment and Project Work.

			==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer Name: Cetin Arslan ==

			===Question 1===

			Quality of the summary:

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 1===


			===Question 2===

			Structure and logic of the article:

			Is the argument clear?

			Is there a logical flow to the article?

			Does one part build upon the other?

			Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 2===


			===Question 3===

			Grammar and style:

			Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

			Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 3===


			===Question 4===

			Figures and tables:

			Are figures and tables clear?

			Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 4===


			===Question 5===

			Interest and relevance:

			Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

			Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

			What would you suggest to improve?
			===Answer 5===


			===Question 6===

			Depth of treatment:

			Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

			Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 6===


			===Question 7===

			Annotated bibliography:

			Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

			Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

			Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 7===

S172691 at 20:10, 19 February 2018

2018-02-19T20:10:26Z

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			In general, the summary is easy to understand and explains clearly the topic of the wiki article and its relevance in project, program and portfolio management.

	===Question 2===		===Question 2===
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			The questions can not be answered as just the abstract is uploaded so far.

	===Question 3===		===Question 3===
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			The abstract is easy to read and there are no spelling and grammatical errors. To upgrade the writing style some linking words could be implemented e.g. Furthermore, in addition, Moreover etc.
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			There are no figures and tables within the article yet.

	===Question 5===		===Question 5===
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	What would you suggest to improve?		What would you suggest to improve?
	===Answer 5===		===Answer 5===
			The abstract explains briefly the relevance of brainstorming as a risk identification method. However, it should be described and elaborated in more detail in the further text.

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			As just the abstract Is uploaded this question can not be answered.


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	===Answer 7===		===Answer 7===

			Good reference, which is also given from the lecturers as recommended bibliography. Within the rest of the article it is necessary to implement two or three additional serious references to ensure the credibility and plausibility of the article.

S172691 at 22:16, 18 February 2018

2018-02-18T22:16:13Z

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	~~== Feedback 1 \| Reviewer Name: Lorenz Sieferle ==~~

	==Feedback 1 \| Reviewer Name: Lorenz Sieferle==		==Feedback 1 \| Reviewer Name: Lorenz Sieferle==

S172691 at 22:15, 18 February 2018

2018-02-18T22:15:53Z

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	In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to to find relevant literature and elaborate and describe the relevance for a Project Manager.		In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to to find relevant literature and elaborate and describe the relevance for a Project Manager.



			== Feedback 1 \| Reviewer Name: Lorenz Sieferle ==

			==Feedback 1 \| Reviewer Name: Lorenz Sieferle==

			===Question 1===

			Quality of the summary:


			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 1===



			===Question 2===

			Structure and logic of the article:

			Is the argument clear?

			Is there a logical flow to the article?

			Does one part build upon the other?

			Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

			What would you suggest to improve?
			===Answer 2===



			===Question 3===

			Grammar and style:

			Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

			Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

			What would you suggest to improve?
			===Answer 3===


			===Question 4===

			Figures and tables:

			Are figures and tables clear?

			Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

			What would you suggest to improve?
			===Answer 4===


			===Question 5===

			Interest and relevance:

			Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

			Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

			What would you suggest to improve?
			===Answer 5===


			===Question 6===

			Depth of treatment:

			Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

			Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 6===



			===Question 7===

			Annotated bibliography:

			Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

			Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

			Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

			What would you suggest to improve?

			===Answer 7===

S122906: Created page with "==Abstract Feedback== Text Clarity; Ok. Language; Ok. References; Ok. In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to to find relevant literature..."

2018-02-12T21:03:04Z

Created page with "==Abstract Feedback== Text Clarity; Ok. Language; Ok. References; Ok. In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to to find relevant literature..."

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==Abstract Feedback==
Text Clarity; Ok.

Language; Ok.

References; Ok.

In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to to find relevant literature and elaborate and describe the relevance for a Project Manager.