Talk:Implementing KPIs - Revision history

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2014-12-02T12:23:56Z

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	'''HOW TO DEFINE KPIs''':		'''HOW TO DEFINE KPIs''':
	*“''First of all, as explained elsewhere,''” You should maybe precise where/in which part of the article. For example, say, “as explained in the previous paragraph”.		*“''First of all, as explained elsewhere,''” You should maybe precise where/in which part of the article. For example, say, “as explained in the previous paragraph”.

			'''Agree and added/changed.'''

	*“ ''having the grand overview,''” I would say large/broad overview		*“ ''having the grand overview,''” I would say large/broad overview

			'''Omitted; grand and large/broad is more or less the same, so sticking with initial text.'''


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	* “''if the KPIs implemented are not performing properly, are not properly defined or haVE some defects.''” Use a synonymous for properly : correctly/adequately		* “''if the KPIs implemented are not performing properly, are not properly defined or haVE some defects.''” Use a synonymous for properly : correctly/adequately
	* “''management run'''S''' the risk''”		* “''management run'''S''' the risk''”
			* “A ''list OF a few examples''”

			'''Agree and implemented on all above'''

	* Avoid repetition of run the risk : take the chance ?		* Avoid repetition of run the risk : take the chance ?
	* “A ''~~list OF~~ a ~~few examples~~''”
			'''Omitted. Take a change is something else. I agree it does come a couple of times, but difficult to find synonym to risk, so original wordings kept in text.'''


	- I think there are some typing errors:		- I think there are some typing errors:
	*“''KPIs had a quick revival when the'''Y''' hit the management market back'' ”		*“''KPIs had a quick revival when the'''Y''' hit the management market back'' ”
	*“''Monitoring and Controlling Process Group or project work''” I would only use capital letters for the word Monitoring since you do not use any for project work.
	*“''on a very high, general, level''” There are too many commas.		*“''on a very high, general, level''” There are too many commas.
	*“''The task pf comparing performance''” : OF		*“''The task pf comparing performance''” : OF
	*“''bypically''” : Typically		*“''bypically''” : Typically

			'''Agreed and implemented in all above'''

			*“''Monitoring and Controlling Process Group or project work''” I would only use capital letters for the word Monitoring since you do not use any for project work.

			'''Agree as general rule, but comment is omitted as it is a direct quote from the standard, why spelling must be maintained.'''


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	For example:		For example:
	“''If you are a single person, doing a simple task, odds are, that you are at least somewhat aware of the progress. But if you are a manager, with multiple persons working with you towards a common goal, perhaps even trying to juggle multiple projects within a portfolio, it can quickly prove more difficult to maintain the overview of the combined work progress.''”		“''If you are a single person, doing a simple task, odds are, that you are at least somewhat aware of the progress. But if you are a manager, with multiple persons working with you towards a common goal, perhaps even trying to juggle multiple projects within a portfolio, it can quickly prove more difficult to maintain the overview of the combined work progress.''”

			'''Have attempted to re-scope a couple of sentenses here and there.'''


	Good luck		Good luck

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2014-12-02T12:15:26Z

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	* “''but it IS WITH an overall APPROACH, and not very specific''.”		* “''but it IS WITH an overall APPROACH, and not very specific''.”
	* “T''he Prince 2 standard'''s''' [4], '''gets''' yet TO a level higher''” Is it singular or plural ? The same remains for “''These includes''” : This includes ?		* “T''he Prince 2 standard'''s''' [4], '''gets''' yet TO a level higher''” Is it singular or plural ? The same remains for “''These includes''” : This includes ?

			'''All included.'''


	'''ADDITIONAL RELATED MATERIAL''':		'''ADDITIONAL RELATED MATERIAL''':
	*“T''he executive management does not have a need for information regarding the day to day performance. They need a larger scale…''” In the first sentence you use a singular and a plural in the second one. I think it would be better to choose either for singular or plural in both sentences.		*“T''he executive management does not have a need for information regarding the day to day performance. They need a larger scale…''” In the first sentence you use a singular and a plural in the second one. I think it would be better to choose either for singular or plural in both sentences.

			'''Omitted, as I disagree. Executive management in this is The board of directors, ie. a group of people, why I thinnk it should be plural.'''

	*“''3 month'''S''' or 6 month''S''''”		*“''3 month'''S''' or 6 month''S''''”

			'''Agree and included.'''

Liclawio: /* Feedback provided by Lyngby */

2014-12-02T12:10:07Z

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	*''for some reasoning'' : Do you mean “for some reasons”'' ?		*''for some reasoning'' : Do you mean “for some reasons”'' ?
	*"''more or less none of the chief executives''” Do you mean ”almost none” ?		*"''more or less none of the chief executives''” Do you mean ”almost none” ?

			'''All included.'''

Liclawio: /* Feedback provided by Lyngby */

2014-12-02T12:08:52Z

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	- I think there are some grammatical mistakes. Here are some corrections:		- I think there are some grammatical mistakes. Here are some corrections:

	'''Thank you for a thorough walk through. I managed to catch some of them myself, but some have been missed, so great use. Most have been implemented, a couple omitted. See comment below'''		'''Thank you for a thorough walk through. I managed to catch some of them myself, but some have been missed, so great use. Most have been implemented, a couple omitted. See comment below'''

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2014-12-02T12:08:22Z

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2014-12-02T12:07:43Z

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	- I find the paragraph about Scorecards/Dashboards interesting, but not detailed enough. For example, a concrete example would make it more relevant.		- I find the paragraph about Scorecards/Dashboards interesting, but not detailed enough. For example, a concrete example would make it more relevant.
			''Two figures, one of each type, added as example. Section in general have been elaborated further as I agree it was somewhat short.'''


	- You could draw a table to summarize the strengths and weaknesses at the end of the paragraph Strengths and Weaknesses.		- You could draw a table to summarize the strengths and weaknesses at the end of the paragraph Strengths and Weaknesses.
			'''Good idea; table drawn to create easy overview.'''


	- It would be great if you could add some pictures, for example a picture showing the results that can be obtained using Single KPIs/Klipfolio.		- It would be great if you could add some pictures, for example a picture showing the results that can be obtained using Single KPIs/Klipfolio.


	- It could be nice to provide concrete examples of companies/projects using theses softwares.		- It could be nice to provide concrete examples of companies/projects using theses softwares.
			'''Reply to both. Omitted action. Basically due to possible legal actions / copyright infringement.'''


	- I would add a conclusion.		- I would add a conclusion.
			'''Omitted action. I don't think an article should have a conclusion. I'm aware the setup is a bit of a "bastard" but my perspective is, a conclusion would be ill placed.'''


	- I think there are some grammatical mistakes. Here are some corrections:		- I think there are some grammatical mistakes. Here are some corrections:
			'''Thank you for a thorough walk through. I managed to catch some of them myself, but some have been missed, so great use. Most have been implemented, a couple omitted. See comment below'''


	'''INTRODUCTION''' :		'''INTRODUCTION''' :

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2014-12-02T12:01:48Z

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	- I would add an abstract (summary) to help the reader quickly determine the article´s purpose.		- I would add an abstract (summary) to help the reader quickly determine the article´s purpose.
			'''Abstract/summary added to beginning.'''


	- Comparing the standards, you could add more details about each of them. For example mention that PMI is an American Standard, IPMA is a European one, Prince 2 is from the UK and ISO is international.		- Comparing the standards, you could add more details about each of them. For example mention that PMI is an American Standard, IPMA is a European one, Prince 2 is from the UK and ISO is international.
			'''Added a table to attempt to create more overview (feedback from other user). Added a bit introduction on each regarding background of each standard.'''


	- I find the paragraph about Scorecards/Dashboards interesting, but not detailed enough. For example, a concrete example would make it more relevant.		- I find the paragraph about Scorecards/Dashboards interesting, but not detailed enough. For example, a concrete example would make it more relevant.

Liclawio: /* Feedback provided by Lyngby */

2014-12-02T11:59:54Z

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	'''In general, thank you for some good, and usefull feedback. I think I have managed to incorporate most of it.'''		'''In general, thank you for some good, and usefull feedback. I think I have managed to incorporate most of it.'''

	'''Where notes or positive feedback have just been given in general, (bullit)points ~~will be~~ skipped. Specific points will be replied with actions/lack of actions'''		'''Where notes or positive feedback have just been given in general, (bullit)points have been skipped. Specific points will be replied with actions/lack of actions'''

Liclawio: /* Feedback - Char */

2014-12-02T11:59:34Z

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	'''In general, thank you for some good, and usefull feedback. I think I have managed to incorporate most of it.'''		'''In general, thank you for some good, and usefull feedback. I think I have managed to incorporate most of it.'''

	'''Where notes/feedback have just been given in general, (bullit)points ~~will be~~ skipped. Specific points will be replied with actions/lack of actions'''		'''Where notes or positive feedback have just been given in general, (bullit)points have been skipped. Specific points will be replied with actions/lack of actions'''

Liclawio: /* Feedback provided by Lyngby */

2014-12-02T11:59:05Z

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	== Feedback provided by Lyngby ==		== Feedback provided by Lyngby ==
			'''In general, thank you for some good, and usefull feedback. I think I have managed to incorporate most of it.'''

			'''Where notes or positive feedback have just been given in general, (bullit)points will be skipped. Specific points will be replied with actions/lack of actions'''