Talk:Risk Identification - Revision history

Tromborg at 23:04, 28 September 2015

2015-09-28T23:04:05Z

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	1-3 Thanks for the feedback! It was nice to see from your review that i was on the right track concerning topic, language and introduction		1-3 Thanks for the feedback! It was nice to see from your review that i was on the right track concerning topic, language and introduction

2015-09-28T23:03:24Z

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 To sum up, the topic seems to have a great potential. I think that if you work on the article a bit more the end result will be great!
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 It seems though that the article has not yet been finished since there are two section at the end of the article with belonging under headings that has not been filled in. They do however seem relevant and interesting. Maybe a section about uncertainty could be relevant for the challenges of risk management, it is only briefly mentioned.  The article could also use some figures related to the text to make it more interesting and to emphasize point made in the article.
 Since the article is not finished my advice is to find a red thread throughout the article to keep it together.
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 * Remember to add Annotated Bibliography into the Contents.
 In general, it is very interesting topic and I believe the author is capable to turn it into a good article. I look forward to read the complete version!

2015-09-23T00:28:01Z

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	To sum up, the topic seems to have a great potential. I think that if you work on ~~it you~~ will ~~have a nice article~~!		To sum up, the topic seems to have a great potential. I think that if you work on the article a bit more the end result will be great!

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2015-09-23T00:27:07Z

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	7. For readers that can be interested on knowing more about that topic, it would be nice an annotated bibliography. Some articles or books for further reading would be nice to learn more about the subject or maybe about related fields.		7. For readers that can be interested on knowing more about that topic, it would be nice an annotated bibliography. Some articles or books for further reading would be nice to learn more about the subject or maybe about related fields.


			To sum up, the topic seems to have a great potential. I think that if you work on it you will have a nice article!

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2015-09-22T23:38:11Z

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	1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.		1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.

2015-09-22T23:37:58Z

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	1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.		1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.

2015-09-22T23:37:38Z

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	'''Reviewer 2: ~~S112910~~:'''		'''Reviewer 2: S131882:'''

	1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.		1. The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.

2015-09-22T21:35:49Z

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	5. It seems that the text try to follow the guidlines to write the "Type 1: Explanation and Illustration method" articles. Nevertheless, to use subheadings will make easier for the reader to distinguish between sections. The code would look something like that:		5. It seems that the text try to follow the guidlines to write the "Type 1: Explanation and Illustration method" articles. Nevertheless, to use subheadings will make easier for the reader to distinguish between sections. The code would look something like that:

	~~===Third level title===~~

	=Big Idea=		=Big Idea=

2015-09-22T21:35:09Z

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	5. It seems that the text try to follow the guidlines to write the "Type 1: Explanation and Illustration method" articles. Nevertheless, to use subheadings will make easier for the reader to distinguish between sections. The code would look something like that:		5. It seems that the text try to follow the guidlines to write the "Type 1: Explanation and Illustration method" articles. Nevertheless, to use subheadings will make easier for the reader to distinguish between sections. The code would look something like that:

	===Third level title===)		===Third level title===

	=Big Idea=		=Big Idea=

	=Application of risk identification=		=Application of risk identification=

	==Risk Identification methods==		==Risk Identification methods==

	==Conditions for optimal risk identification==		==Conditions for optimal risk identification==

	===Use of a group===		===Use of a group===

	===Diversity of the group===		===Diversity of the group===

	===Involving stakeholders===		===Involving stakeholders===

	=Limitations=		=Limitations=


	6. The explanation of the methods is really nice, but maybe some figures would help to make it even more understandable.		6. The explanation of the methods is really nice, but maybe some figures would help to make it even more understandable.

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 . The topic is strongly related with Project, Program and Porfolio management. That make the article really useful for practitioners that have to deal with this kind of issues.
-. The text is written without spelling and grammatical errors and it's understandable.
+. The text is written without spelling and grammatical errors and it's understandable. The introduction is really helpful to let the reader know what the article will be about.
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