Talk:The Sprint Methodology in Agile Project Management - Revision history

Radoslaw at 20:39, 19 February 2018

2018-02-19T20:39:52Z

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	''Overall impression is really good. Text is consistent and transparent. I would recommend to avoid too long sentences. Reader may looses the context and get confused. Example :		''Overall impression is really good. Text is consistent and transparent. I would recommend to avoid too long sentences. Reader may looses the context and get confused. Example :
	* Secondly, the feedback loop created by these short iterations facilitates the direct communication with partners during the development process avoiding unnecessary documentation and bureaucracy.		* Secondly, the feedback loop created by these short iterations facilitates the direct communication with partners during the development process avoiding unnecessary documentation and bureaucracy.
	* The meetings are short and informal leaving no room for problem solving or thorough explanations, hence the importance of standing up during these meetings, which can help the team being focused and removing obstacles to progress.		* The meetings are short and informal leaving no room for problem solving or thorough explanations, hence the importance of standing up during these meetings, which can help the team being focused and removing obstacles to progress.

	~~Additionally~~, punctuation should be carefully used :		Secendly, punctuation should be carefully used :
	*...maximum four weeks, is, that no external...''		*...maximum four weeks, is, that no external...''

			You need watch out also for the repetition, especially :...scope,time...

			When you use abbreviations, they should be introduced first : DSLC

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Radoslaw: /* Answer 3 */

2018-02-19T20:29:36Z

Answer 3

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	Additionally, punctuation should be carefully used :		Additionally, punctuation should be carefully used :
	*...maximum four weeks, is, that no external...		*...maximum four weeks, is, that no external...''
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Radoslaw: /* Answer 6 */

2018-02-19T20:28:17Z

Answer 6

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	''The article is of interesting to read and provides proper insight the project regarding IT and software. Author uses different sources and make a contribution beyond a cursory web search.		''The article is interesting to read and provides proper insight the project regarding IT and software. Author uses different sources and make a contribution beyond a cursory web search.

	Suggestion: would be nice to see reference from the real life case of application the tool :)''		Suggestion: would be nice to see reference from the real life case of application the tool :)''

Onysz: /* Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Radoslaw Tyczynski */

2018-02-19T20:25:10Z

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Radoslaw Tyczynski

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	'' The Abstract provides clear insights of the article and ~~explain~~ the concept. Nicely ~~introduce~~ area of focus and ~~define~~ its contribution in management.''		'' The Abstract provides clear insights of the article and explains the concept. Nicely introduces area of focus and defines its contribution in management.''

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Radoslaw at 20:15, 19 February 2018

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	''Annotated bibliography does not exist yet. What has been ~~prepare~~ so far is based on knowledgeable sources, which clearly support the topic.''		''Annotated bibliography does not exist yet. What has been prepared so far is based on knowledgeable sources, which clearly support the topic.''

Radoslaw: /* Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Place your name here */

2018-02-19T20:14:34Z

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Place your name here

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	''The article uses proper citation and syntax throughout. However, there is no annotated bibliography and it is thus hard for the reader to understand the relevance and topics associated with each citation.''		''The article uses proper citation and syntax throughout. However, there is no annotated bibliography and it is thus hard for the reader to understand the relevance and topics associated with each citation.''

	==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer name: ''~~Place your name here~~''==		==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer name: ''Radoslaw Tyczynski''==
	===Question 1 · TEXT===		===Question 1 · TEXT===
	'''Quality of the summary:'''		'''Quality of the summary:'''
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	''~~Answer here~~''		'' The Abstract provides clear insights of the article and explain the concept. Nicely introduce area of focus and define its contribution in management.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article has a logical flow and while reading the sequence of the paragraphs is understandable. Previous chapters are the fundamentals for the following ones. As far as the article was written there are no contradictions. It is clearly stated what will be the focus on.

			Suggestion : Dividing the article into more chapters could improve transparency.However, keeping in as it is will not decrease the value. ''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''Overall impression is really good. Text is consistent and transparent. I would recommend to avoid too long sentences. Reader may looses the context and get confused. Example :
			* Secondly, the feedback loop created by these short iterations facilitates the direct communication with partners during the development process avoiding unnecessary documentation and bureaucracy.
			* The meetings are short and informal leaving no room for problem solving or thorough explanations, hence the importance of standing up during these meetings, which can help the team being focused and removing obstacles to progress.

			Additionally, punctuation should be carefully used :
			*...maximum four weeks, is, that no external...
			''

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	''~~Answer here'~~'		''Presented figures find their reflection in the text, supporting arguments and enriching the article. They are helpful in understanding the topic and do not overwhelm the written part. '

			Unstructured way of having figures add dynamic to the article, but some may find it differently.
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	'''Interest and relevance:'''		'''Interest and relevance:'''

	Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?		Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

			The article is of high practical and academic relevance

	Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?		Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article is of high practical and academic relevance regarding IT and software related projects. In the early stage of the article the importance of this topic is shown and through the rest of the text it is well proven''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article is of interesting to read and provides proper insight the project regarding IT and software. Author uses different sources and make a contribution beyond a cursory web search.

			Suggestion: would be nice to see reference from the real life case of application the tool :)''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''Annotated bibliography does not exist yet. What has been prepare so far is based on knowledgeable sources, which clearly support the topic.''

Oliver.amb: /* Answer 1 */

2018-02-19T19:10:03Z

Answer 1

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	''The abstract introduces the reader to the key topic of this article, the "Sprint Methodology", proceeding to discuss its importance and relevance within project management. The last two sentences of the abstract clearly define the scope and aim of the article. Overall, a good abstract/summary, however the language could be improved (discussed further in question 3).''		''The abstract introduces the reader to the key topic of this article, the "Sprint Methodology", proceeding to discuss its importance and relevance within agile project management. The last two sentences of the abstract clearly define the scope and aim of the article. Overall, a good abstract/summary, however the language could be improved (discussed further in question 3).''

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Oliver.amb: /* Answer 3 */

2018-02-19T19:02:25Z

Answer 3

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	''The writing is to a high quality, however there is room for improvement in terms and grammar and language. Some suggestions of improvement are:		''The writing is to a high quality, however there is room for improvement in terms and grammar and language. Some suggestions of improvement are:
	*Under "Abstract": using the word "evident" in the sentence "which makes agile project management an evident way" does not make sense. Perhaps the word you are looking for is "appropriate" or "suitable"?		*Under "Abstract": using the word "evident" in the sentence, "which makes agile project management an evident way", does not make sense. Perhaps the word you are looking for is "appropriate" or "suitable"?
	*Revise the first sentence under "Abstract". This sentence is fairly unclear and it is important to not confuse the reader from the off-set.		*Revise the first sentence under "Abstract". This sentence is fairly unclear and it is important to not confuse the reader from the off-set.
	*Good syntax and consistency in terms of referencing, however there is one small error in reference [5] under "Motivation".		*Good syntax and consistency in terms of referencing, however there is one small error in reference [5] under "Motivation".

Oliver.amb: /* Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Oliver Adam Mølskov Bech */

2018-02-19T19:01:40Z

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Oliver Adam Mølskov Bech

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''Figures are very clear and of a high quality. They effectively summarise and support the article discussion. I would however suggest placing the pictures in a more systematic manner, some appear on the right side while other figures appear on the left side.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article is very interesting and has both practical and academic relevance. The motivation and abstract make it clear why the sprint methodology process is relevant in agile project management. Also discussing additional benefits of the procedure. I do not have any suggestions of improvement in terms of interest and relevance as I was highly engaged while reading your first draft.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article is interesting for both practitioners in industry and academics alike. It makes a detailed contribution beyond a web search, using highly academic references. I would suggest researching whether there is any mention of agile project management in the ISO guidelines.''

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	''~~Answer here~~''		''The article uses proper citation and syntax throughout. However, there is no annotated bibliography and it is thus hard for the reader to understand the relevance and topics associated with each citation.''

	==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer name: ''Place your name here''==		==Feedback 2 \| Reviewer name: ''Place your name here''==

Oliver.amb: /* Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Oliver Adam Mølskov Bech */

2018-02-19T18:53:55Z

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Oliver Adam Mølskov Bech

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	*Good syntax and consistency in terms of referencing, however there is one small error in reference [5] under "Motivation".		*Good syntax and consistency in terms of referencing, however there is one small error in reference [5] under "Motivation".
	*Change the word generically to generally under "Motivation". Generically means "not specifically".		*Change the word generically to generally under "Motivation". Generically means "not specifically".
			*Be consistent with using capital case throughout the text, for example, "Scrum" is sometimes capital and other times not.
			*These are minor issues but worth noting nonetheless.
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