Talk:Critical reflection on Project Portfolio Management software
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| + | ===Content aspects=== | ||
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| + | *"Even though Cooper R. argues that poor tools are better than no tools I would argue that a tool that distorts the result is worse."? | ||
| + | *"From 1990 - 1999 IT investments rose from 9% - 22%" % of what? | ||
| + | *Conclusion? | ||
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| + | ===Formal aspects=== | ||
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| + | *use of references | ||
| + | *figure 1 is missing | ||
| + | *hard to see the legend/caption in figure 2 | ||
| + | *"Executives" or "executives? You should choose one of the writting | ||
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| + | ===Grammar and Spelling=== | ||
| + | *deferral instead of deferal | ||
| + | *" As Lee Merkhofer consulting states. It is not beneficial for software developers to make advanced PPM software targeting niche markets."? | ||
| + | *"The bottom line is that even though PPM decision making software is adapted by many companies it fail"s" to gain user acceptance." | ||
Revision as of 16:08, 25 November 2014
Contents |
Val review
Content aspects
- "Even though Cooper R. argues that poor tools are better than no tools I would argue that a tool that distorts the result is worse."?
- "From 1990 - 1999 IT investments rose from 9% - 22%" % of what?
- Conclusion?
Formal aspects
- use of references
- figure 1 is missing
- hard to see the legend/caption in figure 2
- "Executives" or "executives? You should choose one of the writting
Grammar and Spelling
- deferral instead of deferal
- " As Lee Merkhofer consulting states. It is not beneficial for software developers to make advanced PPM software targeting niche markets."?
- "The bottom line is that even though PPM decision making software is adapted by many companies it fail"s" to gain user acceptance."
