Talk:Project Scope Control
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| − | Is missing a bit of industry background,(ex. in pharmaceutical, chemical, others..?)in which the tool is applied or intended to apply. In other industries doesn't | + | Is missing a bit of industry background,(ex. in pharmaceutical, chemical, others..?)in which the tool is applied or intended to apply. In other industries doesn't deals with "scope development" only deals with changes in the scope. |
''"This article focuses on scope change control"'' is clear, but maybe it will be better placed at the end of the abstract exposition and combined with the last sentence. | ''"This article focuses on scope change control"'' is clear, but maybe it will be better placed at the end of the abstract exposition and combined with the last sentence. | ||
Latest revision as of 12:18, 16 September 2017
[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds coherent |
| Language | OK |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | OK |
| Purpose explanation | OK |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | Missing references that could help to back up the abstract |
[edit] Other
Is missing a bit of industry background,(ex. in pharmaceutical, chemical, others..?)in which the tool is applied or intended to apply. In other industries doesn't deals with "scope development" only deals with changes in the scope.
"This article focuses on scope change control" is clear, but maybe it will be better placed at the end of the abstract exposition and combined with the last sentence.
