Talk:Digitalisation of the construction industry
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Revision as of 21:04, 18 September 2017
Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds comprehensible |
| Language | OK with minor misspellings |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | The abstract does not provide any description of any tool/theory/concept |
| Purpose explanation | The abstract does not provide any explanation of the purpose intended in the article |
| Title of the Wiki | Probably need to be reformulated depending the final content of the article |
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The abstract describes the project sponsor as a Key stakeholder and also will describe and explains what the role of a project sponsor is, the article should comply with the "Wiki article requirements"
http://apppm.man.dtu.dk/index.php/Main_Page#Wiki_article_requirements
The abstract fails in providing a description of a tool/theory/concept that can be use by the project sponsor and the intended purpose of the article that cannot be only the explanation of the project sponsor role.
