Talk:Stakeholder Analysis Process
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| − | ** I would really like a visualization example of how the stakeholder profiles could be structured? | + | ** I would really like a visualization example of how the stakeholder profiles could be structured? ''Char= Jep, good idea'' |
*4. Strategy for managing stakeholders | *4. Strategy for managing stakeholders | ||
** I think what you describe is relevant and interesting. I however miss bullet points for the most important elements, or and illustration, or maybe just highlight of the two communication strategies in bold. | ** I think what you describe is relevant and interesting. I however miss bullet points for the most important elements, or and illustration, or maybe just highlight of the two communication strategies in bold. | ||
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Latest revision as of 14:13, 28 November 2014
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[edit] General
Overall I really like the structure and content of the article. It is really informative and the content is relevant and concise. I however lack some illustrations. Maybe some illustrative examples supporting some of you main points?
Format:
- Nice and fluent language. Easy understandable.
- Very few grammatical errors
- References are substantial and of relevance.
- Wiki references are ok, I am however a little confused about the fx reference 1 & 2 is the same? Are you aware of that you can use the same reference several times during the article? Char: perfect, I have correct it
[edit] Commenst for each section
Summary:
- Good summary stating the importance of stakeholder analysis relative to management.
- I felt intrigued to read more.
History:
- I like this because it is precise, and give a brief overview.
- Maybe you could briefly state who the people you mention were? Their titles? Char: Good idea, I will do that!
- Have you thought of including the different theories from Donaldson and Preston: Instrumental stakeholder theory,Descriptive stakeholder, Normative stakeholder theory ...? Char: Yes I have and I will short mention them. Not so much the different theories, but more that they say that the stakeholder theory consist of different theories.
Stakeholder analysis:
- I like the language in this section and how it gives a brief overview.
- Maybe you could include the importance of limiting and framing your stakeholder analysis? Who to include/exclude? What about including the theory of demarcation of the system in order to scope the stakeholder analysis? You could just briefly introduce it and link to other sources?
Stakeholder analysis approach:
- I like that you in bullets state the brief overview and then go into detail.
- Under 1. Identify stakeholders I am wondering how you should handle the identification of these stakeholders? Could you enter them in a map or matrix? Or you a table where you compare them? Like we did in the course? I could also wish for an illustration. Char: I will make illustration to all the steps- good point. The stakeholders are mapped in step 2, but the stakeholder could be placed in a table in step 1- I will do that
- Under ”2. prioritize stakeholders” I like that you include a figure.
- Could you make any general recommendations from that?
- ”3. Profile statement”
- I would really like a visualization example of how the stakeholder profiles could be structured? Char= Jep, good idea
- 4. Strategy for managing stakeholders
- I think what you describe is relevant and interesting. I however miss bullet points for the most important elements, or and illustration, or maybe just highlight of the two communication strategies in bold.
Discussion
- What you describe in you discussion that an understanding of the system is important. Maybe you should refer to how stakeholders are identified?
- I like the subjects you discuss they are of high relevance, you mention some interesting perspectives. Maybe you could highlight those and give links and suggestion to further reading in a ”perspectives” section.
Your feedback has been very constructive and good. I have taken many of your suggestions into account.
