Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management
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| − | '''Text clarity''' Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract | + | '''Text clarity''' Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract - the text should flow |
'''Language''' Good | '''Language''' Good | ||
| − | '''Description of the tool/theory/concept''' | + | '''Description of the tool/theory/concept''' Well addressed, but try to use the word "scope" in the abstract - as in a work breakdown structure is a tool used breakdown the scope of a project |
'''Purpose explanation''' Good, but needs development. Consider: | '''Purpose explanation''' Good, but needs development. Consider: | ||
Revision as of 13:53, 16 February 2018
Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract - the text should flow
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept Well addressed, but try to use the word "scope" in the abstract - as in a work breakdown structure is a tool used breakdown the scope of a project
Purpose explanation Good, but needs development. Consider:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or team etc?
References Missing references to the list of mandatory references/standards
Relevance of article Consider the following:
- It is okay to use examples from the Metro Cityring project, but remember it is not allowed to write the article as a case study. The course requirements have changed
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search
