Talk:Programming a project with the CPM
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Abstract Feedback
Text Clarity; Ok.
Language; Ok.
References; only one relevant reference.
The Abstract is too generic, there is a lot of literature about this old topic, try to find how the technique is applied in current days, as it is mentioned in your second reference.
Is the technique remains the same?, In which direction the technique is evolving?
When developing your article find more relevant sources, use google for a first approach, your first reference is not good enough, I recommend you to use dtu-library database sources.
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Sofie Melchior Karlson
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
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Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
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Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
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