Talk:Value proposition canvas
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==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Julie''== | ==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Julie''== | ||
===Question 1 · TEXT=== | ===Question 1 · TEXT=== | ||
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| + | '''Quality of the summary:''' | ||
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| + | Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
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| + | Key focus is clearly on value proposition canvas. However, the 2nd part of summary begins to describe the canvas into detail. | ||
| + | Maybe this part should move a little further down in article? Instead, a suggestion is to be more general, summarizing points/insights in this part. | ||
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===Answer 1=== | ===Answer 1=== | ||
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'''Structure and logic of the article:''' | '''Structure and logic of the article:''' | ||
| − | Is the argument clear? | + | Is the argument clear? |
| + | Yes | ||
| − | Is there a logical flow to the article? | + | Is there a logical flow to the article? |
| + | Yes | ||
Does one part build upon the other? | Does one part build upon the other? | ||
| + | N/A | ||
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? | Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | - Make a part early in the article explaining the whole canvas | ||
| + | - Use examples to bridge the gap between theory and practice | ||
| + | - Be critical towards the method and look into who/what kind of project this is really valuable for | ||
===Answer 2=== | ===Answer 2=== | ||
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'''Grammar and style:''' | '''Grammar and style:''' | ||
| − | Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? | + | Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? |
| + | Yes | ||
| − | Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? | + | Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? |
| + | Yes | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | I would avoid using "pain" and "gain". If you want to include this, then I suggest to elaborate this. What is it that a customer avoids when "how the products aid their customers and relieve them of their ‘pain’"? | ||
===Answer 3=== | ===Answer 3=== | ||
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Are figures and tables clear? | Are figures and tables clear? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? | Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | The figure in text now is as it should be :-) | ||
===Answer 4=== | ===Answer 4=== | ||
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Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? | Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? | ||
| + | Yes especially if it bridges the gap between practical and academics, then it could be useful in a project. | ||
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? | Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? | ||
| + | Not yet. | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | Write the rest of the article. | ||
===Answer 5=== | ===Answer 5=== | ||
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Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? | Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? | Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? | ||
| + | Not yet. | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | As mentioned before: | ||
| + | - bridge gap between practical and academics | ||
| + | - be critical | ||
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| + | And | ||
| + | - focus on management | ||
===Answer 6=== | ===Answer 6=== | ||
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Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work? | Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work? | ||
| + | No | ||
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? | Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? | Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
What would you suggest to improve? | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | Look at slides regarding annotated bibliograpy | ||
===Answer 7=== | ===Answer 7=== | ||
''Answer here'' | ''Answer here'' | ||
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| + | ==Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Mehdi== | ||
| + | NOTE: only abstract was visible when giving feedback on Monday 19th. | ||
| + | ===Question 1 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Quality of the summary:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 1=== | ||
| + | The summary is very clear and straightforward. | ||
| + | I would add a brief summary of how the article will unfold. | ||
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| + | ===Question 2 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Structure and logic of the article:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the argument clear? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is there a logical flow to the article? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Does one part build upon the other? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 2=== | ||
| + | The abstract is clear and understandable. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Question 3 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Grammar and style:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 3=== | ||
| + | I would avoid using the word "pain" and find a more professionnal word. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Question 4 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Figures and tables:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Are figures and tables clear? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 4=== | ||
| + | The figure illustrates clearly the canvas. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Question 5 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Interest and relevance:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 5=== | ||
| + | With few knowledge on the subject, it seems to me to be relevant and could be used by professionals. | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Question 6 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Depth of treatment:''' | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 6=== | ||
| + | |||
| + | |||
| + | ===Question 7 · TEXT=== | ||
| + | '''Annotated bibliography:''' | ||
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| + | Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? | ||
| + | |||
| + | Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? | ||
| + | |||
| + | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
| + | |||
| + | ===Answer 7=== | ||
| + | References are cited | ||
Latest revision as of 18:38, 19 February 2018
Contents |
[edit] Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Julie
[edit] Question 1 · TEXT
NOTE: only abstract was visible when giving feedback on Monday 19th.
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? What would you suggest to improve?
Key focus is clearly on value proposition canvas. However, the 2nd part of summary begins to describe the canvas into detail. Maybe this part should move a little further down in article? Instead, a suggestion is to be more general, summarizing points/insights in this part.
[edit] Answer 1
Answer here
[edit] Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear? Yes
Is there a logical flow to the article? Yes
Does one part build upon the other? N/A
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions? Yes
What would you suggest to improve? - Make a part early in the article explaining the whole canvas - Use examples to bridge the gap between theory and practice - Be critical towards the method and look into who/what kind of project this is really valuable for
[edit] Answer 2
Answer here
[edit] Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? Yes
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? Yes
What would you suggest to improve? I would avoid using "pain" and "gain". If you want to include this, then I suggest to elaborate this. What is it that a customer avoids when "how the products aid their customers and relieve them of their ‘pain’"?
[edit] Answer 3
Answer here
[edit] Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear? Yes
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? Yes
What would you suggest to improve? The figure in text now is as it should be :-)
[edit] Answer 4
Answer here
[edit] Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? Yes especially if it bridges the gap between practical and academics, then it could be useful in a project.
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? Not yet.
What would you suggest to improve? Write the rest of the article.
[edit] Answer 5
Answer here
[edit] Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? Yes
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? Not yet.
What would you suggest to improve? As mentioned before: - bridge gap between practical and academics - be critical
And - focus on management
[edit] Answer 6
Answer here
[edit] Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work? No
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? Yes
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? Yes
What would you suggest to improve? Look at slides regarding annotated bibliograpy
[edit] Answer 7
Answer here
[edit] Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Mehdi
NOTE: only abstract was visible when giving feedback on Monday 19th.
[edit] Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 1
The summary is very clear and straightforward. I would add a brief summary of how the article will unfold.
[edit] Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 2
The abstract is clear and understandable.
[edit] Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 3
I would avoid using the word "pain" and find a more professionnal word.
[edit] Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 4
The figure illustrates clearly the canvas.
[edit] Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 5
With few knowledge on the subject, it seems to me to be relevant and could be used by professionals.
[edit] Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 6
[edit] Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 7
References are cited
