Talk:Work Breakdown Structure in Construction Management
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| + | ==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Ellen Trovåg Amundsen == | ||
| + | ''There is not much to review, since the report is not complete yet. But the summary is clear and concise. In addition, it is interesting that you will include some practical examples to the article - keep ut the good work:):).'' | ||
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| + | '''Structure and logic of the article:''' | ||
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| + | '''Grammar and style:''' | ||
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| + | '''Interest and relevance:''' | ||
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| + | Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? | ||
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| + | '''Depth of treatment:''' | ||
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| + | Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? | ||
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| + | Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? | ||
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| + | '''Annotated bibliography:''' | ||
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| + | Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article? | ||
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| + | Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? | ||
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==Abstract Feedback== | ==Abstract Feedback== | ||
Latest revision as of 22:28, 19 February 2018
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[edit] Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Ellen Trovåg Amundsen
There is not much to review, since the report is not complete yet. But the summary is clear and concise. In addition, it is interesting that you will include some practical examples to the article - keep ut the good work:):).
[edit] Question 1
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 1
Answer here
[edit] Question 2
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 2
Answer here
[edit] Question 3
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 3
Answer here
[edit] Question 4
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 4
Answer here
[edit] Question 5
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 5
Answer here
[edit] Question 6
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 6
Answer here
[edit] Question 7
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
[edit] Answer 7
Answer here
[edit] Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Text is good, but avoid writing bullet points in the abstract - the text should flow
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept Well addressed, but try to use the word "scope" in the abstract - as in a work breakdown structure is a tool used breakdown the scope of a project
Purpose explanation Well explained, but consider:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or team etc?
References Missing references to the list of mandatory references/standards
Relevance of article Consider the following:
- It is okay to use examples from the Metro Cityring project, but remember it is not allowed to write the article as a case study. The course requirements have changed
- Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search
