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| − | ==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Kevin Lim ''==
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| − | ===Question 1 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Quality of the summary:'''
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| − | Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
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| − | What would you suggest to improve?
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| − | ===Answer 1===
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| − | The summary gives a good introduction alongside with the key focuses the article is going to talk about. It sets you off to a good start of knowing what you will be reading, while it also gives you a short description of what a project is.
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| − | No suggestions here.
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| − | ===Question 2 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Structure and logic of the article:'''
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| − | Is the argument clear?
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| − | Is there a logical flow to the article?
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| − | Does one part build upon the other?
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| − | Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
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| − | ===Answer 2===
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| − | The argumentation is clear and the explanation of the concepts are fine, although it can be quite hard to read in the sea of texts, it would be much easier if there were bullet points.
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| − | The flow runs quite well, it describes one thing and then the other things, it does not go back and forth while trying to explain too much. It feels like you go from A to B to C etc. so it is quite good.
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| − | It definitely does, I do not feel confused at any point.
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| − | It is consistent as it has to go good with the flow, therefore I do not think it is not consistent, furthermore I do not think there are any contradictions as the article very plainly explain what the concept is, and how it is applied.
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| − | A suggestion would be, make bullet points, try to make some points, divide it up so it would be easier to read and try maybe make some visualization, it will help on the understanding.
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| − | ===Question 3 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Grammar and style:'''
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| − | Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
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| − | Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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| − | ===Answer 3===
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| − | There are some minor grammatical errors, but it is not so it is not understandable.
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| − | I personally think, writing such a long article without fill words, would be a challenge. I do not think though, there are fill words, just to fill the word count in this case.
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| − | Just a double check on the grammar, and about spelling error, there will be a underlined red line, when you write here in Wiki, so it will be avoided automatically.
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| − | ===Question 4 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Figures and tables:'''
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| − | Are figures and tables clear?
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| − | Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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| − | ===Answer 4===
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| − | There are no figures, which I miss.
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| − | I think the conclusion is short and precise, nothing you would ask questions about or think that, you did not read about that in the article.
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| − | I do not think I have any suggestions for the conclusion part.
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| − | ===Question 5 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Interest and relevance:'''
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| − | Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
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| − | Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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| − | ===Answer 5===
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| − | I think it has both, it tells you how it can be used in real life, but it also tells you how it works, so I think this article is one of the articles, where you can look up, and think oh I can do it like what this article is telling me and actually use it.
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| − | It is, but I mean, as a reader, you should also know yourself if it is relevant or not, you cannot expect the article to lead you, if you have -10 knowledge in project management, which does not make sense to me. If you google a certain topic, you are typically working about a topic, and hence researching about a topic. So you know what you are doing so to speak.
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| − | I think it would be very cool again if it is illustrated, but otherwise it is good.
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| − | ===Question 6 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Depth of treatment:'''
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| − | Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
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| − | Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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| − | ===Answer 6===
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| − | I would say the article is most interesting for a practitioner, because there are not deep and heavy theory about the tool itself, if you want for academic read, it definitely needs some more theory, history, background and more. Nevertheless, I think the article is a good starting point for a practice.
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| − | No, not a significant contribution, I guess it can be called a normal contribution. If it should be significant, then in my opinion it should be much longer, and a topic that is not really written about. So it is not because it is a bad article, it is just so much of this already exist.
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| − | Regarding the questions asked, there are no improvement from my side, because it depends on what your focus point is. Practice or academic.
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| − | ===Question 7 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Annotated bibliography:'''
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| − | Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
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| − | Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
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| − | Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
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| − | ===Answer 7===
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| − | It does, but I am not sure if you need to include which page and line. Personally I did not do that, just the name and not even the date visited.
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| − | Yes, you can see the links, and the dates.
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| − | It is based on data instead of opinion yes.
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| − | I guess if you should REALLY be going for a 12+ then maybe page and line? (I did not even do this myself)
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| − | ==Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: ''Kevin Lim''==
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| − | ===Question 1 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Quality of the summary:'''
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| − | Yes, the summary gives you a good insight of what the article is about and furthermore it is going a bit into the topic itself already, giving you a taste of what you are going to read about more.
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| − | I think the references needs to be placed rightly, it is probably still under the work though.
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| − | ===Question 2 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Structure and logic of the article:'''
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| − | ===Answer 2===
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| − | The flow of the article is fine, it is taking a topic at a time, and it is going through the relevance of the different things in order to understand the concept. The argumentation is clear and flow is fine, there are also a consistency throughout it all.
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| − | It is free of contradictions too, but I think the article is not fully done, so there are parts missing.
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| − | ===Question 3 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Grammar and style:'''
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| − | ===Answer 3===
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| − | Minor grammatical errors, and spelling errors are majority been avoided, but the controls whether in word or here in wiki.
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| − | As I still think, there are generally not really fill words, but again, it depends on how you are good a describing something, you can think of it as a fill words, when in reality it is not. But there are no filling as such.
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| − | For the grammar and spelling, just a quick run through will be fine, to check for them again.
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| − | ===Question 4 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Figures and tables:'''
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| − | They are very easy to understand, but the quality is a bit bad, without clicking on them, it is a bit hard to read them, but when they are clicked it is easy to read them, no problems there.
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| − | They do summarize the key points, it gives a good overview and understanding because of the figures.
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| − | Try to fix the quality of possible and maybe a bit bigger would be nice, without having to click on them.
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| − | ===Question 5 · TEXT===
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| − | As I said earlier there are some holes in the article, so it is a bit hard to define it one or the other, but if I absolutely must, I think it is more of a academic relevance, it is hard to actually try to implement it, based on what this article is describing the tools.
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| − | Again, I think the relevance is also depending on the researcher, but I would definitely think it is clear how it is relevant in project management.
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| − | Try to fill out the holes, then maybe things will be more clear if it is relevant and if it is practical or academical.
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| − | ===Question 6 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Depth of treatment:'''
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| − | Academic, because as I mentioned at the question before. But again it is a bit hard because of the missing texts.
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| − | I do not think it is a significant contribution at all, because of the missing holes. But if it is filled out, then it is no doubt a contribution, but not beyond at all.
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| − | You should have finish the work by the deadline, because it is hard to give a whole feedback at this point.
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| − | ===Question 7 · TEXT===
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| − | '''Annotated bibliography:'''
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| − | ===Answer 7===
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| − | It is not filled out yet, so I cannot comment on this.
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