Talk:Application of Agile

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What would you suggest to improve?
 
What would you suggest to improve?
 
* A: Not using “is all over”. Use , and . more frequent. Wrong wording like “Agile in its full form is covering various aspects as” in stead of: “Agile is covering various aspects like the following”. Do not start a sentence with but or and. Do not use “All of these parts of” – use “These parts of”
 
* A: Not using “is all over”. Use , and . more frequent. Wrong wording like “Agile in its full form is covering various aspects as” in stead of: “Agile is covering various aspects like the following”. Do not start a sentence with but or and. Do not use “All of these parts of” – use “These parts of”
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What would you suggest to improve?
 
What would you suggest to improve?
 
* A: Add sources, check for pluralis or singularis. Shorten the headlines.
 
* A: Add sources, check for pluralis or singularis. Shorten the headlines.
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Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
 
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
 
* A: No. Fill-words are used but not correctly. Example of a bad sentence: “Some frameworks focus more on some parts of Agile some applying all and yet some only applying fewer”. “It is here noted that it is very possible to integrate some parts of Agile without the others”
 
* A: No. Fill-words are used but not correctly. Example of a bad sentence: “Some frameworks focus more on some parts of Agile some applying all and yet some only applying fewer”. “It is here noted that it is very possible to integrate some parts of Agile without the others”
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What would you suggest to improve?
 
What would you suggest to improve?
 
* A: Make the figure visible.
 
* A: Make the figure visible.
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Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
 
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
 
* A: Yes, the description explains it quite good.  
 
* A: Yes, the description explains it quite good.  
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Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
 
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
 
* A: No.
 
* A: No.
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Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
 
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
 
* A: I cannot tell, since there is no reference.
 
* A: I cannot tell, since there is no reference.
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==Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: ''Maria Christina Prokou''==
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===Question 1 · TEXT===
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'''Quality of the summary:'''
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Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
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===Answer 1===
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''Yes
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Correct grammar mistakes like: 
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instead of 'management style etc. And ' use management style etc., while '
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instead of 'All of these parts of Agile is described' use 'These parts are described'''
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===Question 2 · TEXT===
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'''Structure and logic of the article:'''
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Is the argument clear?
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Is there a logical flow to the article?
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Does one part build upon the other?
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Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 2===
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''No
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No the flow is complicated as there the 'Principles' are not in the correct order
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Yes
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No, as there are no sources
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Add more sources ''
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===Question 3 · TEXT===
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'''Grammar and style:'''
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Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
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Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 3===
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''No
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No
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Check grammar mistakes ''
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===Question 4 · TEXT===
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'''Figures and tables:'''
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Are figures and tables clear?
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Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 4===
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''No, as one of them cannot be seen and the other one is not clear
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No
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Put more relevant figures and clear descriptions  ''
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===Question 5 · TEXT===
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'''Interest and relevance:'''
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Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
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Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 5===
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''Not sure
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Yes
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===Question 6 · TEXT===
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'''Depth of treatment:'''
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Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
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Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 6===
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''No
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No
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===Question 7 · TEXT===
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'''Annotated bibliography:'''
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Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
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Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
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Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 7===
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''No
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No
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Not sure
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Add references ''

Latest revision as of 10:33, 25 February 2019

Contents

[edit] Feedback on Abstract:

Text clarity & language The text is coherent, however there's a few grammatical errors (missing space).
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good.
Article purpose explanation Well elaborated.
Relevance to curriculum Very relevant.
References Make sure to use the list of references whenever necessary.

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Mads Kronholm Petersen

Question 1 Quality of the summary: Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

  • A: Yes.

What would you suggest to improve?

  • A: Not using “is all over”. Use , and . more frequent. Wrong wording like “Agile in its full form is covering various aspects as” in stead of: “Agile is covering various aspects like the following”. Do not start a sentence with but or and. Do not use “All of these parts of” – use “These parts of”


Question 2 Structure and logic of the article: Is the argument clear?

  • A: No.

Is there a logical flow to the article?

  • A: Following the 12 steps are fine. The logical flow of jumping from 5  11  8 does not make sense without an explanation.

Does one part build upon the other?

  • A: Yes, fine with the current skeleton.

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

  • A: Arguments are made without a source.

What would you suggest to improve?

  • A: Add sources, check for pluralis or singularis. Shorten the headlines.


Question 3 Grammar and style: Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

  • A: No.

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

  • A: No. Fill-words are used but not correctly. Example of a bad sentence: “Some frameworks focus more on some parts of Agile some applying all and yet some only applying fewer”. “It is here noted that it is very possible to integrate some parts of Agile without the others”


Question 4 Figures and tables: Are figures and tables clear?

  • A: A mix. One figure is to big to read and use, and the other one is not showing.

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

  • A: No, since there is not description of the large bubbles.

What would you suggest to improve?

  • A: Make the figure visible.


Question 5 Interest and relevance: Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

  • A: Medium.

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

  • A: Yes, the description explains it quite good.


Question 6 Depth of treatment: Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

  • A: Unfortunately not.

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

  • A: No.


Question 7 Annotated bibliography: Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

  • A: No.

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

  • A: No.

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

  • A: I cannot tell, since there is no reference.



[edit] Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Maria Christina Prokou

[edit] Question 1 · TEXT

Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

[edit] Answer 1

Yes

Correct grammar mistakes like: instead of 'management style etc. And ' use management style etc., while ' instead of 'All of these parts of Agile is described' use 'These parts are described

[edit] Question 2 · TEXT

Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 2

No

No the flow is complicated as there the 'Principles' are not in the correct order

Yes

No, as there are no sources

Add more sources

[edit] Question 3 · TEXT

Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 3

No

No

Check grammar mistakes

[edit] Question 4 · TEXT

Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 4

No, as one of them cannot be seen and the other one is not clear

No

Put more relevant figures and clear descriptions

[edit] Question 5 · TEXT

Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 5

Not sure

Yes

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[edit] Question 6 · TEXT

Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 6

No

No

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[edit] Question 7 · TEXT

Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

What would you suggest to improve?

[edit] Answer 7

No

No

Not sure

Add references

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