Talk:Kanban in Project Management
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I have now finished reviewing your wiki article, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. | I have now finished reviewing your wiki article, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. | ||
| − | First of all great English. I really liked it. The only thing that you can change is in the abstract you write "than" but I guess that you mean then. Also, in History you mention somewhere "...carried on in..." it is better to use another verb. Finally, you also write something about "ide" ..(the ide was born..." I think you mean idea. | + | First of all great English. I really liked it. The only thing that you can change is in the abstract you write "than" but I guess that you mean then. Also, in History you mention somewhere "...carried on in..." it is better to use another verb. Finally, you also write something about "ide" ..(the ide was born...") I think you mean idea. |
Otherwise, it is really good. Keep writing. | Otherwise, it is really good. Keep writing. | ||
Latest revision as of 13:04, 13 September 2016
Dear Marit,
I have now finished reviewing your wiki article, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. First of all great English. I really liked it. The only thing that you can change is in the abstract you write "than" but I guess that you mean then. Also, in History you mention somewhere "...carried on in..." it is better to use another verb. Finally, you also write something about "ide" ..(the ide was born...") I think you mean idea. Otherwise, it is really good. Keep writing.
