Talk:Building Information Modeling in project management
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-You mention "......be planned before the design) Use something else instead of design. | -You mention "......be planned before the design) Use something else instead of design. | ||
-Try to be more explicit in the last sentence (The components....discussed). I can understand what you wanna write but make it more clear. | -Try to be more explicit in the last sentence (The components....discussed). I can understand what you wanna write but make it more clear. | ||
| − | Otherwise the abstract looks good | + | Otherwise the abstract looks good. |
Once again good job, keep writing. | Once again good job, keep writing. | ||
Latest revision as of 22:20, 13 September 2016
Dear Maria,
I have now finished reviewing your wiki abstract, many thanks for uploading it in time and well done. Here are some points I would suggest: -You mention "......be planned before the design) Use something else instead of design. -Try to be more explicit in the last sentence (The components....discussed). I can understand what you wanna write but make it more clear. Otherwise the abstract looks good. Once again good job, keep writing.
