Talk:Theory of Constraint
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==Reviewer 3, s121408== | ==Reviewer 3, s121408== | ||
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*The amount of words is limited: around 1800, but I have the impression you are working to improve it. | *The amount of words is limited: around 1800, but I have the impression you are working to improve it. | ||
*Constraint table 1. missing | *Constraint table 1. missing | ||
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** “TOC in very process” | ** “TOC in very process” | ||
** I believe it is Six Sigma and not “Sex Sigma” | ** I believe it is Six Sigma and not “Sex Sigma” | ||
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*I would suggest more simple syntax to enhance the reading flow. For instance, sentences like this: “The rope is a signal generated by the constraint indicating that some CTs have been consumed which triggers the start for new CTs to be processed in the flow.” are a bit confusing for me. | *I would suggest more simple syntax to enhance the reading flow. For instance, sentences like this: “The rope is a signal generated by the constraint indicating that some CTs have been consumed which triggers the start for new CTs to be processed in the flow.” are a bit confusing for me. | ||
*Everything is well documented but I do not clearly see the personal contribution of the author to the topic. | *Everything is well documented but I do not clearly see the personal contribution of the author to the topic. | ||
*It emphasizes on the TOC tool but the portfolio/program/project management perspective is not enough developed from my point of view. For example I would like to know how the TOC would affect the decision-making step at the portfolio management level. How TOC could be used for a project benefit analysis… I have seem and attempt to relate TOC to project management in: Extension of the TOC for Project Management but it is resulting hard for me to understand. I think that some more concrete examples could help to the reader. | *It emphasizes on the TOC tool but the portfolio/program/project management perspective is not enough developed from my point of view. For example I would like to know how the TOC would affect the decision-making step at the portfolio management level. How TOC could be used for a project benefit analysis… I have seem and attempt to relate TOC to project management in: Extension of the TOC for Project Management but it is resulting hard for me to understand. I think that some more concrete examples could help to the reader. | ||
*In general I think it is a great job of documentation, but the coherence, order and flow of the sentences need improvements. | *In general I think it is a great job of documentation, but the coherence, order and flow of the sentences need improvements. |
Revision as of 18:13, 22 September 2015
Josef: Jane, I like the idea. Make sure to stick to the structure we propose for "methods" articles. I am looking forward to reading about the application of TOC in project management!
Reviewer 3, s121408
This article was accessed the 22/09/2015 15:51 Formal:
- The amount of words is limited: around 1800, but I have the impression you are working to improve it.
- Constraint table 1. missing
- Wrong referencing such as (REF6, p 649)
- Figures not well attached.
- Language misspelling:
- “TOC in very process”
- I believe it is Six Sigma and not “Sex Sigma”
Content:
- I would suggest more simple syntax to enhance the reading flow. For instance, sentences like this: “The rope is a signal generated by the constraint indicating that some CTs have been consumed which triggers the start for new CTs to be processed in the flow.” are a bit confusing for me.
- Everything is well documented but I do not clearly see the personal contribution of the author to the topic.
- It emphasizes on the TOC tool but the portfolio/program/project management perspective is not enough developed from my point of view. For example I would like to know how the TOC would affect the decision-making step at the portfolio management level. How TOC could be used for a project benefit analysis… I have seem and attempt to relate TOC to project management in: Extension of the TOC for Project Management but it is resulting hard for me to understand. I think that some more concrete examples could help to the reader.
- In general I think it is a great job of documentation, but the coherence, order and flow of the sentences need improvements.