Talk:Project Execution Model (PEM)
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# I appreciate your idea of discussing your model by comparing it with other relevant project models as you have indicated it in the current last paragraph title (Discussion of Novo Nordisk's Project Execution Model compared to other project models). | # I appreciate your idea of discussing your model by comparing it with other relevant project models as you have indicated it in the current last paragraph title (Discussion of Novo Nordisk's Project Execution Model compared to other project models). | ||
# The article is nicely illustrated with the pictures which help the understanding. Although, I would suggest to name them as ‘’Figure 1, 2, 3, …etc.’’ which would allow to refer to the pictures more specifically at the relevant place of the text. | # The article is nicely illustrated with the pictures which help the understanding. Although, I would suggest to name them as ‘’Figure 1, 2, 3, …etc.’’ which would allow to refer to the pictures more specifically at the relevant place of the text. | ||
| + | # "A project is defined as: "A temporary endeavor undertaken to create a unique product, service or result"." --> Could you expound and describe more what do you mean under this project title? As for me, it is not so clear. | ||
# For further investigation: | # For further investigation: | ||
## I would suggest to consider writing about the concrete applications and limitations of the model chosen. | ## I would suggest to consider writing about the concrete applications and limitations of the model chosen. | ||
## It would be also nice to focus on the references and make a bibliography section at the end of the article. | ## It would be also nice to focus on the references and make a bibliography section at the end of the article. | ||
Revision as of 21:09, 22 September 2015
Mette: Very nice topic choice that fits the requirements for the type of article. Remember the structure of a "method article". Look forward to reading more about this tool.
Reviewer 1:Andkamp
- Describes an interesting method developed by Novo Nordisk, a nice blend between case study and method description
- Minor English mistakes, that can be corrected through second time reading
- Good presentation of the topics, however some minor grammar mistakes make it a little more difficult to be read
- Nice figures, but missing captions and misplacement could provide a better outlook.
- Main points are clear but not extensively described, in order the reader to get a better understanding of the topic.
- No figure reference
- More effort in inter-wiki links and hyperlinks in the text should be done
- Better matrix of plan communication of stakeholders
- Missing references and bibliography
- Interesting subject with various aspects
- Length of the article is small, as probably it is unfinished, but there is a clear enthusiasm on that subject
- Phases makes a concrete structure of the article but the sections should be better presented in the table of contents.
- It would be nice to see implementations on other business, as well as the pros and cons of this method
- All in all, a nice subject that needs more effort in order to be useful and be connected with subjects such as Project Evaluation and Selection for the Formation of the Optimal Portfolio
Reviewer 3 - Biankajuh
- I have find the abstract of your article very well-designed which fulfill the role of introducing the main purpose and highlights of the article including a brief introduction to the PEM model. I really like the fact that you have chosen such a real life method as the PEM model used by Novo Nordisk.
- I appreciate your idea of discussing your model by comparing it with other relevant project models as you have indicated it in the current last paragraph title (Discussion of Novo Nordisk's Project Execution Model compared to other project models).
- The article is nicely illustrated with the pictures which help the understanding. Although, I would suggest to name them as ‘’Figure 1, 2, 3, …etc.’’ which would allow to refer to the pictures more specifically at the relevant place of the text.
- "A project is defined as: "A temporary endeavor undertaken to create a unique product, service or result"." --> Could you expound and describe more what do you mean under this project title? As for me, it is not so clear.
- For further investigation:
- I would suggest to consider writing about the concrete applications and limitations of the model chosen.
- It would be also nice to focus on the references and make a bibliography section at the end of the article.
