Talk:"Interpersonal skills of a Project Manager"
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| + | The Abstract is too descriptive in different aspects that probably could fit better in an introduction section, by describing multiple concepts and aspects it deviates from the primary intention of the abstract that is to provide a clear understanding of the concept(s) and an explanation of the objectives that the article would like to achieve. | ||
Latest revision as of 10:50, 18 September 2017
[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds comprehensible, coherent and it builds on sources |
| Language | OK |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | OK, the article describes different concepts, and key aspects of this concepts |
| Purpose explanation | There is not purpose explanation, try to explain the intention of the article |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | OK |
[edit] Other
The Abstract is too descriptive in different aspects that probably could fit better in an introduction section, by describing multiple concepts and aspects it deviates from the primary intention of the abstract that is to provide a clear understanding of the concept(s) and an explanation of the objectives that the article would like to achieve.
