Talk:Implementation of BIM as communication tool for construction site operations
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− | The abstract describes the current situation of the application of BIM on-site, the article should | + | The abstract describes the current situation of the application of BIM on-site, ''"on the construction site BIM could replace current outdated communication processes"'' the article should elaborates in the communication processes that reflects the title of the article. |
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− | + | The article purpose should be developed based in the communication processes that reflects the title of the article and will be aligned with the ''"Wiki article requirements"''. | |
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+ | The abstract also mentioned the person of ''"project operator"'' that should be defined in the article. |
Latest revision as of 18:16, 18 September 2017
[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
Text clarity | The text sounds comprehensible and it builds on references |
Language | OK with minor grammar errors |
Description of the tool/theory/concept | Is there but not clear for the reader |
Purpose explanation | There is a purpose but not aligned with the "Wiki article requirements" |
Title of the Wiki | OK |
References | OK |
[edit] Other
The abstract describes the current situation of the application of BIM on-site, "on the construction site BIM could replace current outdated communication processes" the article should elaborates in the communication processes that reflects the title of the article.
The article purpose should be developed based in the communication processes that reflects the title of the article and will be aligned with the "Wiki article requirements".
The abstract also mentioned the person of "project operator" that should be defined in the article.