Talk:HAZOP method, deviation analysis
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|'''Language'''|| OK with minor grammar errors that affects the clarity of the text | |'''Language'''|| OK with minor grammar errors that affects the clarity of the text | ||
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| − | |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| The method has not been | + | |'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| The method has not been clearly described |
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|'''Purpose explanation'''|| Is not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article | |'''Purpose explanation'''|| Is not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article | ||
Latest revision as of 21:34, 18 September 2017
[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text is not clear for the reader |
| Language | OK with minor grammar errors that affects the clarity of the text |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | The method has not been clearly described |
| Purpose explanation | Is not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article |
| Title of the Wiki | OK |
| References | OK |
[edit] Other
The abstract is not well written making its reading difficult.
The abstract mentioned that Nowadays many companies use this device to enhance their project management, are the article will describe a device or a method?, if it is a device explain the method behind the device.
