Talk:Line Balancing - Yamazumi Chart Method
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Revision as of 11:34, 14 February 2018
Abstract Feedback
Text clarity Good
Language Okay
Description of the tool/theory/concept Interesting topic, but where is this used in project/program/portfolio management? This concept is explained in an operations management context
Purpose explanation Okay, but what is a project manager/team going to achieve from reading this?
References Missing appropriate references to mandatory list of references
Relevance of article Consider reframing the article to fit the project management community or consider your alternative idea. Keep in mind the following:
- Who is the reader? Project Manager or Sponsor etc?
- Try linking the topic to a knowledge area of project management - e.g. project resources
