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==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Pedro Cunha''==
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===Question 1 · TEXT===
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'''Quality of the summary:'''
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Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 1===
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The summary has a good contextualization and it is transparent. The purpose of the article is cleat and I can see a connection to the project management.
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===Question 2 · TEXT===
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'''Structure and logic of the article:'''
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Is the argument clear?
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Is there a logical flow to the article?
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Does one part build upon the other?
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Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 2===
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The argument is clear and the article contains a logical flow. It explains the three points of view of the different books, and the respectively concepts always stating the difference and no contradictions.
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===Question 3 · TEXT===
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'''Grammar and style:'''
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Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
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Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 3===
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Some sentences are confuse and too concise - review the english. Check grammar errors - check verb tense and unfinished words.
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===Question 4 · TEXT===
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'''Figures and tables:'''
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Are figures and tables clear?
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Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 4===
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Figures and tables are clear, but they need better explanations. Re-size the diagram of PRINCE2 and go deeper on the interpretation. Make own tables to summarize the content of the article can help the reader to get a better understanding.
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===Question 5 · TEXT===
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'''Interest and relevance:'''
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Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
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Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 5===
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The article and the theme is interesting, has strong academic relevance, and it is clear in the text why. As it is said in the abstract all the projects results in outcomes and they are all developed and managed in order to increase the value of the outcome.
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===Question 6 · TEXT===
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'''Depth of treatment:'''
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Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
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Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 6===
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The article has a strong importance in helping real life projects being managed. The article exposes more information that the one that can be found online.
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===Question 7 · TEXT===
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'''Annotated bibliography:'''
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Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
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Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
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Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
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What would you suggest to improve?
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===Answer 7===
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The conclusion must be finished, must conclude and summarize all the key points from all the article. At the moment is too concise and

Revision as of 18:44, 23 February 2019

Contents

Feedback on Abstract:

Text clarity Not that clear
Language OK
Description of the tool/theory/concept Not sure what the article will actually contain
Purpose explanation Not that clear
Title of the Wiki Could be more descriptive.
Relevance to curriculum Yes since you focus on project management.
References Remember to make correct references. Here are some guidelines from DTU Library: https://www.bibliotek.dtu.dk/english/servicemenu/find/reference_management/references
Other The abstract is too short. Have a look in the Course Handbook where the suggested structure is mentioned.

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Pedro Cunha

Question 1 · TEXT

Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 1

The summary has a good contextualization and it is transparent. The purpose of the article is cleat and I can see a connection to the project management.

Question 2 · TEXT

Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 2

The argument is clear and the article contains a logical flow. It explains the three points of view of the different books, and the respectively concepts always stating the difference and no contradictions.

Question 3 · TEXT

Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 3

Some sentences are confuse and too concise - review the english. Check grammar errors - check verb tense and unfinished words.

Question 4 · TEXT

Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 4

Figures and tables are clear, but they need better explanations. Re-size the diagram of PRINCE2 and go deeper on the interpretation. Make own tables to summarize the content of the article can help the reader to get a better understanding.

Question 5 · TEXT

Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 5

The article and the theme is interesting, has strong academic relevance, and it is clear in the text why. As it is said in the abstract all the projects results in outcomes and they are all developed and managed in order to increase the value of the outcome.

Question 6 · TEXT

Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 6

The article has a strong importance in helping real life projects being managed. The article exposes more information that the one that can be found online.

Question 7 · TEXT

Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 7

The conclusion must be finished, must conclude and summarize all the key points from all the article. At the moment is too concise and

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