Talk:Responsibility Assignment Matrix (RACI Matrix)

Revision as of 10:38, 22 September 2015

Kristine: Very interesting subject. You seem to have a very specific tool and a good idea of how you want to structure your article. Looking forward to reading the finished version of your article.

Charles: Comments for the reviewers: the spreadsheet example can't be uploaded and the internal links of the Wiki have not been set up yet.

Gaetangarnotel - Reviewer n°1

Hi Charles,
Here are my main advice for your article. Of course, it is just my point of view to try to give you some ways of improvement:

• In the overview, you have small details to fix: first, the bold text is a bit weird since it happens only once in the article. Second, you ask rhetorical questions (Why?) which seems a bit too oral to fit in a Wiki article. Maybe you should go back to a more written language, at least in this part.
• "Use and examples": As before, get rid of the oral forms of expression like in "Here is (finally) the explanation of the RACI acronym".
• Thanks for putting my name in your table :) I like the idea of learning through an example instead of having a heavy theoretical part. Maybe you good actually elaborate a bit more on it, by giving a real-life example (Construction project, project at Thales that you led etc..). I think that the example of the simulation game at the end is not sufficient to make the reader understand. Moreover, I've actually been a bit surprised that we begin with an example. You maybe should prepare a bit more the reader saying that instead of getting into theory straightly, we'll learn through an example. Doing so, you avoid the surprise that some people could have.
• For the part, "Using the template", you should introduce what this part is going to be about. It may be an overall comment: you should lead the reader a bit more so we understand your way of thinking.
• I really like the fact that you tried to put this method into perspective by giving alternatives. If you could add some tips for the reader to choose the right method in a clever way, it would be perfect.
• I would see more limitations. With all the alternatives you pointed out, I think that more limitations has forced the different companies to create their own model.
• In the conclusion, you may need a bit more. Summarize all you have said and what the reader should have learnt thanks to your article.
  

As a conclusion, your article is quite good even though some ways of improvement exist. Hope my advice will help you improve it.