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Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject  
Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject  
Formal aspects
Formal aspects
* The article follow the right method’s structure.
* The article follow the right method’s structure.

Revision as of 16:00, 22 September 2015

Anna: Very nice topic and method you have chosen. I don't have a lot of comments as it seems that you are well within the requirements for the article and that you have already created a great structure including the application and limitations.

s150905, Review 1: Hi, the illustration of the method is really engaging and interesting for the subject

Formal aspects

  • The article follow the right method’s structure.
  • The few images used are very focused and understandable.
  • There is a lack in blank spaces and paragraphs’ division in the section, which might help the reader.

Content

  • The introduction is very clear and illustrative.
  • The topic clearly developed, underling the essential aspects in a precise way.
  • The method description maybe seems sometimes a little much specific and the reader could find difficulties in following the parts depicted; but here the example you have made could act as a helper.
  • Not all the references appear to be of high quality