Talk:Location Based Scheduling
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Mette: I like your idea. Remember to keep the structure for a "method article". You write about the benefits of using LBS instead of CPM, so maybe you could discuss why and where LBC is a better tool. | Mette: I like your idea. Remember to keep the structure for a "method article". You write about the benefits of using LBS instead of CPM, so maybe you could discuss why and where LBC is a better tool. | ||
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| + | • The overall impression is that the article is clear and straight forward, with many good figures and tables | ||
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| + | • All together very good language | ||
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| + | • The table with types of activity linkage is very good, with both description and a figure | ||
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| + | • Very good with links to other articles, like for example WBS | ||
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| + | • The figures are very nice, but a suggestion is to add the sources | ||
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| + | • The abstract is very good, with both a short example and a comparison. A suggestion is to move the first two sentences in the second paragraph over to the abstract, so that you describe some of the content of the article in the abstract rather than in the introduction to the method. | ||
Revision as of 20:39, 22 September 2015
Mette: I like your idea. Remember to keep the structure for a "method article". You write about the benefits of using LBS instead of CPM, so maybe you could discuss why and where LBC is a better tool.
Review 2, s150621
• The overall impression is that the article is clear and straight forward, with many good figures and tables
• All together very good language
• The table with types of activity linkage is very good, with both description and a figure
• Very good with links to other articles, like for example WBS
• The figures are very nice, but a suggestion is to add the sources
• The abstract is very good, with both a short example and a comparison. A suggestion is to move the first two sentences in the second paragraph over to the abstract, so that you describe some of the content of the article in the abstract rather than in the introduction to the method.
