Talk:Portfolio Management and complexity in organizations

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Username : Michaelnguyendtu
Review 1:

Hello, as an overall perspective the article is very well written, and you have a great knowledge about the theory. On the other hands you still need the last details as literature, references, figures and layout to make it complete. Good work! Formal aspects

• The article has an overall good academically sound to it, which makes it pleasant to read!
• Short and precise sentences which makes the article easy to read. Grammar in the article is also very neat!
• The structure is at this point good; however sub headlines in the final version would make it easier to navigate.
• For the layout in the chapter: Goals of Portfolio Management, it would maybe be “easier for the eye” to look at by using line break between the numbers 1-5.
• As this is a draft I am sure that the final version would have figures to illustrate some of the point, if not this could be a consideration.
• Annotated bibliography is at this point missing as you have also stated, important also to remember to attach some description to these.

Content

• The article is less than the required amount of words which makes room for more if you feel something is still missing.
• The “Scope definition” could maybe have a more concrete description what the article exactly is to “discover”?

Group 10: Marazaki Ilektra s142899 Portfolio Management and complexity in organizations

Reviewer 2: s141592

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To begin with,in general this article is very clear and every one can understand the purpose of the article without knowing much about Portfolio Management.

Formal aspects:

• This article is free of grammatical errors or spelling errors.
• The most of the sentences are very clear but some of them should be shorter instead of long winded.
• By reading this you can understand the meaning of the article.
• The article is written formal and it follows the wiki standards.

Content aspects:

• I do not think that it is an article is helpful for practitioner because it describes Portfolio Management from a very general view.
• The size of the article is perfect,not too long or too short.Everyone can read it without being board or not understanding.
• Most of the parts are pretty tied together and you can notice the escalation of the parts very clear.
• The summary contains the most of the parts that you will meat in the article.
• The article also provides many sources and several studies and practical cases.
• The article does not contain bibliography.
• I do not think that the article seems to be copy and paste because by reading it you can notice the authors mentality.