Talk:Critical reflection on Project Portfolio Management software: Difference between revisions

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"Even though Cooper R. argues that poor tools are better than no tools I would argue that a tool that distorts the result is worse."?
"From 1990 - 1999 IT investments rose from 9% - 22%" % of what?
Conclusion?

deferral instead of deferal
" As Lee Merkhofer consulting states. It is not beneficial for software developers to make advanced PPM software targeting niche markets."?
"The bottom line is that even though PPM decision making software is adapted by many companies it fail"s" to gain user acceptance."

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 == Val review ==
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+===Content aspects===
+*"Even though Cooper R. argues that poor tools are better than no tools I would argue that a tool that distorts the result is worse."?
+*"From 1990 - 1999 IT investments rose from 9% - 22%" % of what?
+*Conclusion?
+===Formal aspects===
+*use of references
+*figure 1 is missing
+*hard to see the legend/caption in figure 2
+*"Executives" or "executives? You should choose one of the writting
+===Grammar and Spelling===
+*deferral instead of deferal
+*" As Lee Merkhofer consulting states. It is not beneficial for software developers to make advanced PPM software targeting niche markets."?
+*"The bottom line is that even though PPM decision making software is adapted by many companies it fail"s" to gain user acceptance."