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Over all the structure of the article is very nice, many sources and it is easy to read. You have described the topic very well in a very understandable way. | Over all the structure of the article is very nice, many sources and it is easy to read. You have described the topic very well in a very understandable way. | ||
The litteratur you have used, is very reliable and trustworthy. | The litteratur you have used, is very reliable and trustworthy. I miss references for the loop diagrams. | ||
'''Feedback on grammatical- and punctuation errors''' | '''Feedback on grammatical- and punctuation errors''' | ||
I myself am not an expert in English, I could not give you feedback on grammatical and punctuation errors, but your article is written in a very understandable and simple language. | I myself am not an expert in English, I could not give you feedback on grammatical and punctuation errors, but your article is written in a very understandable and simple language. | ||
Revision as of 21:00, 25 November 2014
Over all the structure of the article is very nice, many sources and it is easy to read. You have described the topic very well in a very understandable way. The litteratur you have used, is very reliable and trustworthy. I miss references for the loop diagrams.
Feedback on grammatical- and punctuation errors
I myself am not an expert in English, I could not give you feedback on grammatical and punctuation errors, but your article is written in a very understandable and simple language.