Talk:Impact vs. Probability
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Revision as of 10:47, 16 September 2017
Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | The text sounds coherent and it builds on references |
| Language | OK with minor misspellings |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | OK |
| Purpose explanation | Is there but not clear for the reader, try to reformulate by explaining the intention of the article |
| Title of the Wiki | To broad, probably need to be rethinking in order to reflect the content of the Article |
| References | OK |
Other
"In risk analysis, risk is traditionally defined as a function of probability and impact" Missing reference?
"By combining the probability and impact, the Level of Risk can be determined." Missing reference? who says that or is your own assessment.
