Talk:Communication with public stakeholders on the femern link project in Germany
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[edit] Feedback on Abstract:
Text clarity | The text sounds comprehensible |
Language | OK with minor misspellings |
Description of the tool/theory/concept | Is there but is not clear for the reader. |
Purpose explanation | Is there but not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article |
Title of the Wiki | The title describes a situation |
References |
[edit] Other
The title of the article describes a situation that is explained in the lines below, it describes dialog forums as a debate on a partnership basis, can dialog forum be considered a tool/concept?, if yes the title of the article should be reconsidered.
The abstract probably is too descriptive with the communication issues experienced in German projects that it deviates to describes a concrete tool/concept and fails to provide a clear explanation of the purpose.