Talk:Project sponsor

Revision as of 19:09, 13 February 2018

Abstract Feedback

Text clarity This can be improved - the text needs to flow, especially after "Effective PM and BA role collaboration..."

Language Consider:

1. Spelling errors e.g. "Responsabilities"
2. Do not write in first person e.g. "we"
3. Do not use abbreviations e.g. PM and BA without spelling them out beforehand

Description of the tool/theory/concept Good, but apply the above changes to enhance understanding

Purpose explanation Well addressed (e.g. clear that the Project Owner is the reader), but briefly explain the content/structure of the points going to be addressed in the article in the abstract

References Good use of references, but make sure to specify page numbers and so on

Relevance of article Relevant. Consider to:

1. Narrow the role of a project sponsor to a specific phase of a project (e.g. in the initiation stage when creating a business case)
2. Explaining the differences between a project manager, project sponsor and project owner
3. Explaining the project sponsor's role in terms of project governance