Talk:Agile One Page Project Management

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|'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is very coherent.
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|'''Text clarity & language'''|| The text is okay, however there's a few grammatical errors.
 
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|'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Very good.
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|'''Description of the tool/theory/concept'''|| Good. However, a short description of "Agile One Page Project Management" would be beneficial.
 
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|'''Article purpose explanation'''|| Missing. Keep up the good work and make sure to include an explanation of the article purpose.
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|'''Article purpose explanation'''|| Well elaborated. However, do you have permission to mention "LEO Pharma A/S" in your article? Best practice is just to mention "based on a pharmaceutical company/pharmaceutical industry."
 
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|'''Relevance to curriculum '''|| Relevant
 
|'''Relevance to curriculum '''|| Relevant
 
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|'''References'''|| Add some references in your abstract, if needed.
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|'''References'''|| Good references.
 
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Revision as of 23:02, 18 February 2019

Feedback on Abstract:

Text clarity & language The text is okay, however there's a few grammatical errors.
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good. However, a short description of "Agile One Page Project Management" would be beneficial.
Article purpose explanation Well elaborated. However, do you have permission to mention "LEO Pharma A/S" in your article? Best practice is just to mention "based on a pharmaceutical company/pharmaceutical industry."
Relevance to curriculum Relevant
References Good references.
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