Talk:Dan Pink on Motivation
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+ | ==Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: ''Mathias Steuch''== | ||
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+ | '''Quality of the summary:''' | ||
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+ | Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear? | ||
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+ | What would you suggest to improve? | ||
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+ | '''Structure and logic of the article:''' | ||
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+ | '''Grammar and style:''' | ||
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+ | Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors? | ||
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+ | Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words? | ||
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+ | ===Answer 3=== | ||
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+ | ===Question 4 · TEXT=== | ||
+ | '''Figures and tables:''' | ||
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+ | Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way? | ||
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+ | ===Question 5 · TEXT=== | ||
+ | '''Interest and relevance:''' | ||
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+ | Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance? | ||
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+ | Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant? | ||
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+ | '''Depth of treatment:''' | ||
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+ | Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read? | ||
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+ | Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search? | ||
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+ | '''Annotated bibliography:''' | ||
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+ | Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion? | ||
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Revision as of 21:53, 25 February 2019
Contents |
Feedback on Abstract:
Text clarity & language | The text is coherent. |
Description of the tool/theory/concept | Good. |
Article purpose explanation | This can be further elaborated. |
Relevance to curriculum | Make sure to link this within the context of project/program/portfolio management and not organizational management. Look into Project Human Resource as a source of inspiration (if it makes sense). |
References | Make sure to use the list of references wherever appropriate. |
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Mathias Steuch
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 4
Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 5
Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?