Talk:Gantt Charts as a Tool for Project Management

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Josef: Hello, I like the idea for your article. Please make sure to follow the suggested structure for "method" articles.

Reviewer 3: DanielKrogh
Formal aspects
  • The structure of the article is made as expected from type 1 article.
  • There is few errors in the text. Be careful to use daily speaking language like e.g. “didn’t” instead for did not.
  • The sentences are well formulated are in the right length.
  • All the important points in the article are illustrated in figures.
  • It is easy to understand the figures and they are well explained.
  • Almost every figure is referenced in the text, but where Figure 1? Make sure that each figure has its own number and are referenced in the text.
  • All the figures is referenced.
  • There is a lack of sub-headings which could be made easily. The figures size are proper and does not need to edited.
Content aspects
  • It is a highly interesting topic and hence it is relevant for a practitioner.
  • The length of the article is as expected.
  • The flow of the article has a logical structure and have no comments on that.
  • The summary fitted fine for this size of a project and highlighted the most important things.
  • I do not have access to the reference list, so I cannot comment on that.
  • The author has begun to make an annotated bibliography but is not finished yet.
  • The overall impression is that there is no trace of plagiarism.

It is a very interesting topic, but also very relevant. If I should come with any suggestions, it would be if there could be an example of any real life cases where it went good/bad. The article is easy to read and the flow is good.

Reviewer 2: s140767

Formal aspects:

  • The article's structure meets all requirements.
  • The writing style is coherent, short with easy-to-understand precise sentences.
  • Few grammatical errors (f.ex. activities that needs)
  • All main points illustrated with an appropriate figure, but Figure 1 is missing.
  • All figures are very understandable, but Figure 4 and 5 have too big size.
  • References to figures provided.

Content aspects:

  • The article could be interesting to a practitioner because it provides a clear overview of the tool guidance, with relevance to project management and possible pitfalls.
  • It meets almost all requirements including: the length, academic language, sufficient sources.
  • The number references are slightly above required (3-10)
  • Missing annotated bibliography.

In general, it is a very good article! Easy to read, coherent, and gave me a very clear understanding of the tool. I had the pleasure to read this article.

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