Talk:Value Proposition Canvas

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Julianna Apli

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Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 1

Clear summary, it explains the necessity of the tool and the example illustrates really nicely the topic and that why is it needed. However, it would be nice to have at least one more reference in the abstract that is related to the topic (Value Proposition Canvas and not just management in general) and add a short overview to the summary so it would make it easier to understand the structure of the article.

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Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

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Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

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Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

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Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

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Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

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Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

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Abstract Feedback

Text Clarity; Ok.

Language; Ok.

References; missing references related to the topic

In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to elaborate and describe the relevance for a Project Manager.

Try to connect the topic with "stakeholder management" aspects.