Talk:Project Risk Management and Project Risk Management Processes

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Josefs says: Hello, I like your idea and topic. But I suggest to chose a focus area, otherwise, your article may end up a bit generic, and not as interesting as it could be because it is too broad. E.g. the root cause areas, or the process or...


s150905, Review 1:

Hi, the article appears complete, with a clear topic and its satisfied all the characteristic of the Wiki-article.

Formal aspects

  • The part dedicated for the description of the method is clear but i think there is something missing to make the reader more confident with the topic
  • It presents a little lack of punctuation and a few spelling errors
  • I like the use of the images that help the reader understand better each part

Content

  • The article is less than the required words and, while you read it, you feel like there is something missing.
  • In my opinion the whole article appear a little generic
  • The link between all the parties of the article are not so clearly liked.
  • the references used appear to be really focused on the topic
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