Talk:Gantt Charts as a Tool for Project Management
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Josef: Hello, I like the idea for your article. Please make sure to follow the suggested structure for "method" articles.
Reviewer 3: DanielKrogh
- Formal aspects
- The structure of the article is made as expected from type 1 article.
- There is few errors in the text. Be careful to use daily speaking language like e.g. “didn’t” instead for did not.
- The sentences are well formulated are in the right length.
- All the important points in the article are illustrated in figures.
- It is easy to understand the figures and they are well explained.
- Almost every figure is referenced in the text, but where Figure 1? Make sure that each figure has its own number and are referenced in the text.
- All the figures is referenced.
- There is a lack of sub-headings which could be made easily. The figures size are proper and does not need to edited.
- Content aspects
- It is a highly interesting topic and hence it is relevant for a practitioner.
- The length of the article is as expected.
- The flow of the article has a logical structure and have no comments on that.
- The summary fitted fine for this size of a project and highlighted the most important things.
- I do not have access to the reference list, so I cannot comment on that.
- The author has begun to make an annotated bibliography but is not finished yet.
- The overall impression is that there is no trace of plagiarism.
It is a very interesting topic, but also very relevant. If I should come with any suggestions, it would be if there could be an example of any real life cases where it went good/bad. The article is easy to read and the flow is good.