Talk:Managing start-ups in Unregulated Markets

Abstract Feedback

Text clarity Good

Language Minor errors e.g. writing "is fits" when "fits" is required

Description of the tool/theory/concept Difficult to follow - what concept/theory/tool is exactly being described here? Project management is too generic

Purpose explanation Notes: Avoid using a case study (concurrency) - the course requirements changed - do not use a case study

1. Avoid using a case study (concurrency) - the course requirements changed - do not use a case study
2. Avoid creating a new concept to project management without consulting/agreeing with Josef
3. Who is the reader? Project Manager or Sponsor etc?

References Missing appropriate references to mandatory list of references

Relevance of article Consider the following:

1. Try linking to a knowledge area e.g. "Project Human Resource Management"
2. Ensure depth of the article so it contributes to the project management community more than a normal web search