Talk:Lean Approach to Scheduling in Construction Projects
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Abstract Feedback
Text Clarity; Ok.
Language; Ok.
References; Ok.
Gantt charts are horizontal bar graphs, a visual representation, and not represent a scheduling technique, however is the common way to represent a CPM technique, do not forget to explain how LPS and LBS are graphically represented.
Annotated bibliography is a list of articles, books or documents followed by a briefly descriptive and evaluative paragraph, what you have under your annotated bibliography section are references this section is missing in your article, however is nice that you already established the structure of the article.
In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to elaborate and describe the relevance for a Project Manager.
