Talk:Requirements management using SysML
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Revision as of 09:53, 19 February 2019 by Hani Mike Rae Selim (Talk | contribs)
Feedback on Abstract:
The abstract seems incomplete. However, please find my immediate feedback below (19-Feb-2019)
Text clarity & language | The text is okay, however there's a lack of flow/consistency (too many dotted lines). |
Description of the tool/theory/concept | Good. |
Article purpose explanation | Good. Ensure to emphasize how the tool is relevant and its project/program/portfolio management without getting into too much technical detail about the modelling language itself. |
Relevance to curriculum | Relevant |
References | Good references. |