Talk:Outcome
Contents |
Feedback on Abstract:
| Text clarity | Not that clear |
| Language | OK |
| Description of the tool/theory/concept | Not sure what the article will actually contain |
| Purpose explanation | Not that clear |
| Title of the Wiki | Could be more descriptive. |
| Relevance to curriculum | Yes since you focus on project management. |
| References | Remember to make correct references. Here are some guidelines from DTU Library: https://www.bibliotek.dtu.dk/english/servicemenu/find/reference_management/references |
| Other | The abstract is too short. Have a look in the Course Handbook where the suggested structure is mentioned. |
Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Pedro Cunha
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
The summary has a good contextualization and it is transparent. The purpose of the article is cleat and I can see a connection to the project management.
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
The argument is clear and the article contains a logical flow. It explains the three points of view of the different books, and the respectively concepts always stating the difference and no contradictions.
Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
Some sentences are confuse and too concise - review the english. Check grammar errors - check verb tense and unfinished words.
Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 4
Figures and tables are clear, but they need better explanations. Re-size the diagram of PRINCE2 and go deeper on the interpretation. Make own tables to summarize the content of the article can help the reader to get a better understanding.
Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 5
The article and the theme is interesting, has strong academic relevance, and it is clear in the text why. As it is said in the abstract all the projects results in outcomes and they are all developed and managed in order to increase the value of the outcome.
Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
The article has a strong importance in helping real life projects being managed. The article exposes more information that the one that can be found online.
Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 7
The conclusion must be finished, must conclude and summarize all the key points from all the article. At the moment is too concise . my suggestion is to include the discussion in the conclusion and clarify some key points.
Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Rajat Kumar
Question 1 · TEXT
Quality of the summary:
Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 1
The purpose is clear and has a good context in relation to the topic and Project management
Question 2 · TEXT
Structure and logic of the article:
Is the argument clear?
Is there a logical flow to the article?
Does one part build upon the other?
Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 2
The argument is clear and the article contains a logical flow. It explains the three points of view of the different books, and the respectively concepts always stating the difference and no contradictions.
Question 3 · TEXT
Grammar and style:
Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?
Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 3
Some sentences are confuse and too concise - review the english. Check grammar errors - check verb tense and unfinished words.
Question 4 · TEXT
Figures and tables:
Are figures and tables clear?
Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 4
Figures and tables are clear, but they need better explanations. Re-size the diagram of PRINCE2 and go deeper on the interpretation. Make own tables to summarize the content of the article can help the reader to get a better understanding.
Question 5 · TEXT
Interest and relevance:
Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?
Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 5
The article and the theme is interesting, has strong academic relevance, and it is clear in the text why. As it is said in the abstract all the projects results in outcomes and they are all developed and managed in order to increase the value of the outcome.
Question 6 · TEXT
Depth of treatment:
Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?
Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 6
The article has a strong importance in helping real life projects being managed. The article exposes more information that the one that can be found online.
Question 7 · TEXT
Annotated bibliography:
Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?
Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?
Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?
What would you suggest to improve?
Answer 7
The conclusion must be finished, must conclude and summarize all the key points from all the article. At the moment is too concise . my suggestion is to include the discussion in the conclusion and clarify some key points
