Talk:E. Pihl & Søn A/S from a management perspective
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UserName:Jejenji - REVIEW 3
- Great intro to describe the whole picture
- The chapters regarding the history are a bit long. From my point of view it would be useful to make a table or describe the most important events through bullet points.
- Interesting to know which constructions they built in DK
- According to me it would be more important to highlight the MANAGEMENT part instead of the HISTORY. Maybe shorten a bit the history part and expand more the Management paragraph. It could be useful to consult more sources about these part and insert a little bit of theory.
- Detailed conclusion that underlines who took decisions
- Adding a sort of hierarchy picture of the company would help to understand how’s the power distributed
- It could be useful to divide the conclusions and implications in subchapter to analyse more into details each part (example: leadership,“enlightened despotism”…. )
- Nice point the “enlightened despotism”
FORMAL ASPECTS
- Overall the article follows the case study structure
- Grammar wise is correct
- Lack of figures and visual illustrations
- Formatted Properly
CONTENT ASPECTS
- The article is interesting
- It does relate to PPPM
- Appropriate length
- Logic flow between HISTORY _ MANAGEMENT _ CONCLUSION
- Reference materials are a bit poor
- Great annotated bibliography
- The historical part seems poorly re-elaborated
