Talk:The benefits of systems engineering

Mette: Looking forward to read more of your article when it is more completed.

KB1991, reviewer 3:

• I have an idea that the article isn’t completely finished yet ☺ But when looking at the structure of it and the headlines it looks good - Both the formatting and the read threat.
• Good that you have planned to implement figures to illustrate the text.
• There are a few mistakes where words have been swapped, like writing ‘with’ instead of ‘which’.
• Good that there are references to all the text – And looks like the sources is of good quality.
• Would have been nice to read more of the article ☺

S150801 Reviewer 1

The Benefits of Systems Engineering

Overall impression

I can see that you are not quite finished her yet. However, I am looking forward to read it when completed.

• I think it is an article with a good flow and easy to read.
• I like your consequent use where to put your references.
• And I think it is good that you are referring to illustrations in you text, I think this will make it easier to understand your points.

Rooms for improvement

• You are talking about many interesting topics, but I am a bit concern that you are covering too much topics in this article.
• I would be a bit careful to draw in too many personal experiences. (Like you mention in the Summary)
• Maybe you can link to other articles in you text, for example where you talk about PERT charts.
• I also think you can make the paragraphs smaller, but I think this will fix it self when you get the diagrams in.

It is a bit hard to comment on your structure when it is not completed, but so far it seems good.