Talk:The benefits of systems engineering

Mette: Looking forward to read more of your article when it is more completed.

KB1991, reviewer 3:

I have an idea that the article isn’t completely finished yet ☺ But when looking at the structure of it and the headlines it looks good - Both the formatting and the read threat.
Good that you have planned to implement figures to illustrate the text.
There are a few mistakes where words have been swapped, like writing ‘with’ instead of ‘which’.
Good that there are references to all the text – And looks like the sources is of good quality.
Would have been nice to read more of the article ☺

S150801 Reviewer 1

The Benefits of Systems Engineering

I can see that you are not quite finished her yet. However, I am looking forward to read it when completed.

I think it is an article with a good flow and easy to read.
I like your consequent use where to put your references.
And I think it is good that you are referring to illustrations in you text, I think this will make it easier to understand your points.

You are talking about many interesting topics, but I am a bit concern that you are covering too much topics in this article.
I would be a bit careful to draw in too many personal experiences. (Like you mention in the Summary)
Maybe you can link to other articles in you text, for example where you talk about PERT charts.
I also think you can make the paragraphs smaller, but I think this will fix it self when you get the diagrams in.

It is a bit hard to comment on your structure when it is not completed, but so far it seems good.

As I can see, the article is not finished, however the topic sounds to be interesting and I would like to read it when it is done
Writing language and style is of good quality, yet I do not think it is professional to mention personal relations to the topic
Seems like you have a good framework of writing, you use the references, figures, and have a total contents of the article in mind, I believe it can become a good article when you finish it