Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving

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Review by Nemo

Layout and Wiki-issues

  • Layout looks good in general.
  • You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
  • When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
  • You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.

Abstract

  • The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
  • Formulation is fine and keywords make sence:)
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