Talk:Kaizen Event - a managerial tool for problem-solving

Review by Nemo

Layout and Wiki-issues

• Layout looks good in general.
• You are using the Wiki functions for keywords and references very nice.
• When doing numbered bullet points I can recommend that you use "#" instead of "*"
• You have some errors with missing references, that are highlighted with red in the text. It looks like you are already working on this.
• You link to some sides that does not exist fx. "Kaizen" and "Kaizen Events".
• You are doing some quotes, which are very nice in general. I can recommend the function <blockquote> xxx </blockquote>

Abstract

• The abstract assumes that the reader knows what Kaizen Event is about. At this stage I did had never heard about it. For me it would have been nice that the concept was shortly introduced in the abstract.
• Why is it limited to project management - what about programme and portfolio?
• The keywords make sence:)

Introduction

• What are the 5 basic lean principles that you mention? It would be nice to mention them.
• It should be considered to have the section "Kaizen Event definition" before "Kaizen vs. Kaizen Events in Lean thinking".
• "Arrow diagram" - is that a gantt chart?
• To some degree I see the subsection as separate. Flow in the article and transition between subsections can be optimised. This can typically be done with 1-2 lines text in the end of each subsection focusing on the transition to the next subsection.