Talk:Stakeholder Management
From apppm
Review - B wiki
Concept aspects:
- In general, the structure is good, although I would have used shorter headings to help the reader
- Length around 2300 words is ok for this topic. May be, you could have explained more in detail some aspects you only name
- In the first section, you could briefly introduce who is Freeman and what is Prince2
- In the “How and when should you create stakeholder engagement?” section, I find quite messy the citations from different sources. Maybe it is a problem of punctuation marks
Formal aspects:
- Try to use more punctuation marks, such as commas. These way, it is easier for the reader
- Some grammatical and spelling errors found:
- Not appropriate use of auxiliary verbs: “it is important that these are discussed”
- Past participles: “be classified”
- “Performance” is written together
- Sometimes not appropriate usage of References
- If you are saying in the text “as described by”, you should say who said it and then put the reference
- The figures are helpful to understand the concept, but maybe more explanation is needed
